Tuesday, 13 December 2011

Journal #8

Dear Journal,
It’s time. It’s time for me to pay for everything I have caused. I need to pay for all the pain and suffering that has been because of my stupid need to be Queen. My mind in going crazy!! I can barely function. To be honest, I don’t know how I am even capable of writing this.
I am a mess. My doctors keep talking about me sleepwalking and such, but I don’t even respond. I just want everything to go away. I JUST WANT THE BLOOD OFF MY HANDS! It won’t come off...I can smell the blood, constantly. I think it is time for me to go. I wish it was to heaven...but it will be hell. I am going to kill myself tonight. . Goodbye world, I will never see you again.
Goodbye!
~Lady M.

2 comments:

  1. Praise: I really like the emotion you showed her having. It really demonstrates the anger and frustration she was feeling.

    Polish: Maybe mention how she is feeling hearing about herself sleepwalking. Mention her reaction when she heard this news

    Ponder: Does Macbeth fit into her feelings?

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  2. Well done Julia. You have creatively shown LM's development and transformation throughout the play. You have brought in some good examples from the play to show when she is strong and you show how her guilt also weakens her. You have demonstrated her evolution as a character. Good work.

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